diff --git a/game/begin.coffee b/game/begin.coffee index 69448ff..b91df35 100644 --- a/game/begin.coffee +++ b/game/begin.coffee @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ situation "start", Burglary is a curious line of employment. Befittedly, Ronald Chernoff was very curious about a black phone behind the door of apartment 406 in a wooden box on a small table no farther than two meters from the bed. - A gift, a prototype, a valuable treasure left by Anastacia Kozlowa when she fled the country. + A gift, a prototype, a valuable treasure left by Anastasia Kozlowa when she fled the country. Of course, one had to be reasonably au fait with her *Instagram* to notice that. Peter opened his door to find an empty silent corridor. diff --git a/game/story.coffee b/game/story.coffee index 08edaaf..0c7bbb1 100644 --- a/game/story.coffee +++ b/game/story.coffee @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ situation "living-room", """) bookcase: (character, system) -> lvl1(""" - Either Anastacia has a very conflicting taste in books, or she has no taste at all. Let's see... + Either Anastasia has a very conflicting taste in books, or she has no taste at all. Let's see... #{textlink("“Soviet Black Magic: a Lost Art”,", "magic")} #{textlink("”My Dinner with Zane”,", "zane")} #{textlink("The Scientific Dictionary of Everything,", "dictionary")} @@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ situation "living-room", lvl2(""" A big fat Dictionary of Everything, issued in 1989. Nobody reads every page of these. - Ronald doubts Anastacia got to read at least one page. + Ronald doubts Anastasia got to read at least one page. """) silent: (character, system) -> lvl2(""" @@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ situation "bedroom", The sheets are still fresh. """) wardrobe: () -> lvl1(""" - Anastacia's wardrobe is very high-maintenance. + Anastasia's wardrobe is very high-maintenance. It has a built-in ironing board (with an iron hanged nearby), with 5 drawer rows for #{textlink("lingerie,", "lingerie")} #{textlink("accessories", "accessories")}, #{textlink("shoes.", "shoes")}, #{textlink("hats", "hats")} and.. #{textlink("audio players.", "mp3")} On the hangers are #{textlink("cashmere coat,", "coat")} #{textlink("sport jacket,","jacket")} #{textlink("jeans,", "jeans")} #{textlink("green shirt,", "gshirt")} #{textlink("a red sleeveless shirt", "rshirt")}, #{textlink("an orange vest,", "vest")} #{textlink("knee-length flower dress,", "dress")} #{textlink("another flower dress,", "adress")} #{textlink("alpaca coat,","coat")} #{textlink("a short skirt", "skirt")} and #{textlink("a big collection of dancing costumes.", "costumes")} @@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ situation "bedroom", """) shoes: () -> lvl2(""" - Anastacia doesn't care for the footwear fashion. + Anastasia doesn't care for the footwear fashion. These 4 pairs of combat boots and 13 pairs of ballet flats can attest that. Of course, there are sandals, loafers, flat dress shoes.. That's a strong dislike for heels... or maybe it's a medical problem? @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ situation "bedroom", """) sketch: () -> lvl4(""" - It's a portrait of Anastacia. + It's a portrait of Anastasia. She bites her lower lip slightly. Her eyes are sad, or maybe concerned with something. The sketch is signed: *"L. Y. - 2017"*