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@@ -27,16 +27,28 @@ You still don't know His name, only the surname: Toreador. He's foreign.
 
 Just right.
 
-The tip leads you to a loud car party. There's too many shiny machines and not enough women around. You feel a faint scent of something <em>evil</em> nearby. You look like a skinny teenager among some tall white dudes.
+He sends you a message with an address, no details. It leads you to a loud car party. Some sad old guys loudly arguing about their cars. You feel a faint scent of something <em>evil</em> nearby.
 
-* <ell> Get a feel on the scene. [] There are some people fussing around two of the cars roaring next to each other. You heard about underground races, but this just looks <em>sad.</em> -> start3
-* <ell> Follow the scent. [] You can't track it, you just know it's near. -> start3
+->choices
+
+= choices
+{You look like a skinny teenager among some tall white dudes.|"Hey! He's coming!" The guys suddenly stop arguing.|The air is quiet and tense.}
+
+* <ell> (Follow the scent.) [] You can't track it, you just know it's near.
+-> choices
+* <ell> [Tap one of the guys on a shoulder.]
+"Excuse me, is that a Fiat?"
+„Get lost, kid.“
+Okay, you know <b>nothing</b> about these cars.
+-> choices
+* <ell> There are some people fussing around two of the cars roaring next to each other. You heard about underground races, but this just looks <em>sad.</em>
+-> choices
 
 // You can outrun and jump over anyone, even in your puffy skirts. (He's obsessed with nice clothing, and honestly you caught a bit of this too. You can't go out in anything <em>drab.</em>)
 
+// The monsters you fight are not human, not entirely. You usually catch them eating people alive in some dark alleys - turns out, there are a lot of different ways of doing that, and they usually don't even bother with hiding.
 
-The monsters you fight are not human, not entirely. You usually catch them eating people alive in some dark alleys - turns out, there are a lot of different ways of doing that, and they usually don't even bother with hiding.
-
+/*
 You have to say the Word of Pure Heart and bash them with your Magic Mace. Even the straight hit on the skull won't kill the bad guy, but it's enough to drive him away, and maybe leave a nasty scar. 
 
 * It would take much less from them to kill you, though. -> start4
@@ -47,6 +59,6 @@ You wouldn't stand in a fair fight even with your speed and practice.
 
 Today is a special day.
 
+*/
 
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-    -> END
+-> END